Done

What Up Peeps!!!

POEM BACKGROUND: This poem is about how a relationship can turn sour and damage the heart at times. I like how cut-throat and honest this poem is. It doesn't hold back at all. This poem was not written by me at all. This was the girl that I had told you about-the one that had let me have some of her poems before she moved to Texas! So, here's her poem "Done"! Enjoy!

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Done

I hate you

You hate me

Then why on earth do I

still love you?

If we don't make each other

happy

Why are we together

Sittin here waitin for

something to change

sittin alone at home

This situation is so

insane

why don't I just go

better yet you go

Your tearin me apart

Constantly breakin my

heart

But its ok Im through

Im done with you.

By: Young Breezy

A.K.A

Lauren Harris

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So, what do you think? It's pretty good for an 8th grader. She was the one who had gotten me started on writing poems! One thing about this poem is that it shows you how much of a roller coaster love is! One minute, you're happy-feeling on top of the world. And the next minute, you're questioning your status with him. It's crazy! Love is just plain crazy! But, that's another topic I would love to discuss with you another time.

If you want your poem published on my blog, you can contact me through my e-mail:

greenorangesinger7@gmail.com

Or, if you go to Millennium High School, you can talk to me about it there! Well Peeps, I gotta go! I will talk to you guys later!

*Remember*~Winning isn't everything but the will to win is.

Your "Analyzed" Friend,

Saidah Kamaria Wilson, A.K.A ~OFFICIAL Mrs. Samberg~