Saturday, 5 March 2011

Life (Being Perfect)

What Up Peeps!!!
POEM BACKGROUND: I had written this poem when I was in 8th grade. It's a bit rough, to say the least! But at least it shows my earlier work as a poet! This poem is basically about how I make it through the day trying to make everything right. So, sit back and enjoy my poem "Life (Being Perfect)"!
Life (Being Perfect)
My life is far from perfect.
Things go wrong everyday.
I try to make everything.....
But, in the end,
things go wrong.
I try making straight A's;
I try being the best trombone
player in school;
I try being the best big sister for
my 1 yr. old brother & my 10 yr. old
I even try to be the best student
any teacher could ever have.
Sometimes, it works;
don't get me wrong;
Matter of fact;
it does work.
But, it's very hard to achieve it
A lot of things are thrown into
my life right now.
I'm going to be moving on May 30th;
I'm going to a new school;
With new friends;
And new weather.
I can't say that I'm not going to
try to be perfect;
Because I am going to try to be
And I'm gonna let the whole world
know it.
Wish me luck!
I'm gonna need it!
Written By:
Saidah Wilson
So, what are your thoughts on this poem?! Well, one thing is for sure: I was a little obsessed with semi-colons on this poem! But, it's all good! I think this poem is really cute! I like how I have so much confidence in myself! And yes, I was a goody-good back then! I still am today! This poem was written right before I moved here to Arizona! But, believe me, my poetry has gotten way better since then! I can't wait to show you guys my latest poems! I've had so much time to myself lately to write some really good and profound poems! So, keep a look-out for those! If you are a poet and would love to see your poem on this blog, you can email me here:
Or, if you go to Millennium High School, you can just talk to me about it!!
Well Peeps, I better go! There's a new SNL episode tonight and I can't wait to see it! Plus, I'm having tacos tonight!! Cool Beans!! Goodnight everyone!!
*Remember*~Be calm and collected, peace is a virtue.
Your "Excited" Friend,
Saidah Kamaria Wilson, A.K.A ~OFFICIAL Mrs. Samberg~